I have just updated a previous post for Ann Aguirre with a review of the fifth and FINAL book in her CORINE SOLOMON SERIES: Agave Kiss.
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Saturday, March 30, 2013
Friday, March 29, 2013
UPDATE! Theresa Meyers: LEGEND CHRONICLES SERIES
I have just updated a previous post for Theresa Meyers with a review of the third and FINAL book in her LEGEND CHRONICLES SERIES: The Chosen.
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Thursday, March 28, 2013
UPDATE! Debbie Viguié's WITCH HUNT SERIES
I have just updated a previous post for Debbie Viguié's WITCH HUNT SERIES with a review of the second novel in the series, The Last Grave.
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Wednesday, March 27, 2013
UPDATE! Katie Reus: MOON SHIFTERS SERIES
I have just updated a previous post for Katie Reus' MOON SHIFTERS SERIES with a review of the third novel in the series, Mating Instinct.
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Tuesday, March 26, 2013
Michael Boccacino: "Charlotte Markham and the House of Darkling"
Series: Charlotte Markham and the House of Darkling
Plot Type: Horror Fantasy
Ratings: V4; S2; H1
Publisher: William Morrow (Imprint of HarperCollins)
WORLD-BUILDING
This novel is on the final ballot for the 2012 Bram Stoker Award for a first novel in the horror genre. Set in Blackfield, a rural village in what appears to be Victorian England, this is a gothic horror story that puts one in mind of Henry James' Turn of the Screw or Charlotte Brontë's Jane Eyre, each with its own intrepid governess, decaying estate, fog-shrouded woodlands, and otherworldly bumps in the night. To get the "gothiness" off to a good start, the book's opening line mimics that of Daphne du Maurier's Rebecca: "Every night I dreamt of the dead."
In this case, the governess is the recently widowed Charlotte Markham; the estate is Everton; and the master of the house is the recently widowed Henry Darrow, who hires Charlotte to tend to the education of his two boys, Paul and James. Although the people living on the estate and in the village are normal human beings, many of them believe (though they might not admit it to one another) that, as Shakespeare said, "There are more things in heaven and earth...Than are dreamt of...." (Hamlet, Act I)
The themes of the story are the strength of family ties and the lengths people will go to save those they love.
THE STORY In this case, the governess is the recently widowed Charlotte Markham; the estate is Everton; and the master of the house is the recently widowed Henry Darrow, who hires Charlotte to tend to the education of his two boys, Paul and James. Although the people living on the estate and in the village are normal human beings, many of them believe (though they might not admit it to one another) that, as Shakespeare said, "There are more things in heaven and earth...Than are dreamt of...." (Hamlet, Act I)
The themes of the story are the strength of family ties and the lengths people will go to save those they love.
After Charlotte lost her husband in a fire that destroyed their home, she was hired as a governess for Paul and James Darrow. As the story begins, Charlotte has been in residence for several months, and the boys' mother has been dead for almost a year. Charlotte suffers from horrific nightmares featuring all of her dead loved ones: her mother, father, and husband, all of whom were visited by an ominous man in black at the moment of their deaths. Each time, the mysterious man then disappeared into thin air. Meanwhile, both Paul and James are having scary nightmares about their beloved mother.
In the book's first scene, the boys' nanny is found murdered, and Charlotte steps up to become the boys' sole caretaker/teacher. Since their mother's death, their father has been a remote, grief-stricken fixture in the house, spending his days sequestered in his study and his nights roaming the vast household. Charlotte also wanders the house at night, and the two have frequently met in the music room to talk about their respective losses. One of the story threads involves Charlotte's growing attraction to her employer (and vice versa).
One day, Charlotte responds to one of Paul's dreams about his mother by taking the boys on an outing in the forest. As they follow Paul's map of his dream, they find themselves in The Ending, a mysterious place that hosts a number of strange creatures that are doomed to eternal life because Death cannot enter The Ending. As they enter The Ending, they approach the ominous House of Darkling, where they are—shockingly—met by Lily Darrow, the boys' supposedly dead mother, and she's not a ghost. The House is a hugely magnificent mansion full of wondrous, and sometimes horrible, creatures and oddities—like something out of a dark fairy tale (or something from H. P. Lovecraft's imagination). The author eloquently describes each and every one of the freaky knickknacks of Darkling, but eventually the continuous stream of minutely detailed descriptions does become tedious.
As Charlotte and the boys make several visits to House of Darkling, Charlotte begins to realize that Lily has made a horrible bargain with Mr. Whatley, the master of Darkling, in order to be with her sons once more. Whatley is playing a deadly game with all of them, and Charlotte is determined to be the winner. In another gothic reference, Whatley himself is a throwback to Emily Brontë's Heathcliff: "He had a windswept look about him, his hair wild and disheveled, his clothing very fine but rumpled, his shirt not entirely tucked in, his collar askew, yet the most interesting thing about him was his eyes—so dark that no light escaped them..." (p. 118)
Most of the creatures in The Ending look like humans, but it is soon obvious that they are wearing human skin over some seriously weird shapes. (Tentacled monsters that look suspiciously like Lovecraft's Cthulhu are a continuing theme.) Here's an example, as Mr. Whatley hosts a dinner: "'It is our tradition that the host of any gathering make an offer of friendship, and the best thing that anyone can hope to give is a piece of themselves.'...Mr. Whatley's human hand unraveled into a conjoined grouping of tentacles. He sliced off one of the smaller limbs with the knife, and the hand re-formed no worse for wear. The foot-long piece of flesh fell into the sauté pan, and the servant quickly divided it into sixteen equal portions, tossing them in the air to brown them on all sides. When he was finished, he rolled the cart around the table and served each of the guests a cooked piece of Mr. Whatley." (p. 179) In another scene, one of the guest gets tired of listening to a conversation about politics, so she just pulls off her ears and puts them in her purse.
ANALYSIS
In the book's first scene, the boys' nanny is found murdered, and Charlotte steps up to become the boys' sole caretaker/teacher. Since their mother's death, their father has been a remote, grief-stricken fixture in the house, spending his days sequestered in his study and his nights roaming the vast household. Charlotte also wanders the house at night, and the two have frequently met in the music room to talk about their respective losses. One of the story threads involves Charlotte's growing attraction to her employer (and vice versa).
One day, Charlotte responds to one of Paul's dreams about his mother by taking the boys on an outing in the forest. As they follow Paul's map of his dream, they find themselves in The Ending, a mysterious place that hosts a number of strange creatures that are doomed to eternal life because Death cannot enter The Ending. As they enter The Ending, they approach the ominous House of Darkling, where they are—shockingly—met by Lily Darrow, the boys' supposedly dead mother, and she's not a ghost. The House is a hugely magnificent mansion full of wondrous, and sometimes horrible, creatures and oddities—like something out of a dark fairy tale (or something from H. P. Lovecraft's imagination). The author eloquently describes each and every one of the freaky knickknacks of Darkling, but eventually the continuous stream of minutely detailed descriptions does become tedious.
As Charlotte and the boys make several visits to House of Darkling, Charlotte begins to realize that Lily has made a horrible bargain with Mr. Whatley, the master of Darkling, in order to be with her sons once more. Whatley is playing a deadly game with all of them, and Charlotte is determined to be the winner. In another gothic reference, Whatley himself is a throwback to Emily Brontë's Heathcliff: "He had a windswept look about him, his hair wild and disheveled, his clothing very fine but rumpled, his shirt not entirely tucked in, his collar askew, yet the most interesting thing about him was his eyes—so dark that no light escaped them..." (p. 118)
Most of the creatures in The Ending look like humans, but it is soon obvious that they are wearing human skin over some seriously weird shapes. (Tentacled monsters that look suspiciously like Lovecraft's Cthulhu are a continuing theme.) Here's an example, as Mr. Whatley hosts a dinner: "'It is our tradition that the host of any gathering make an offer of friendship, and the best thing that anyone can hope to give is a piece of themselves.'...Mr. Whatley's human hand unraveled into a conjoined grouping of tentacles. He sliced off one of the smaller limbs with the knife, and the hand re-formed no worse for wear. The foot-long piece of flesh fell into the sauté pan, and the servant quickly divided it into sixteen equal portions, tossing them in the air to brown them on all sides. When he was finished, he rolled the cart around the table and served each of the guests a cooked piece of Mr. Whatley." (p. 179) In another scene, one of the guest gets tired of listening to a conversation about politics, so she just pulls off her ears and puts them in her purse.
ANALYSIS
Charlotte is a strong character from the very beginning. She is definitely not the usual shy, virginal, Brontë governess. Charlotte was raised in exotic India, has been married, and has gone through a series of personal losses that have taken away any innocence she may have once had. She handles the boys with love, but she is also quite firm, sometimes using Indian curses and threats to keep them under control. Here's an example of Charlotte's response to a raging fight between the two boys: "It's nothing to me if you want to kill one another...I imagine that it would be much easier to care for one child as opposed to two...If violence and murder are the methods you choose to use when dealing with family, then we can only surmise the tactics you might use when dealing with your peers would be that much worse. We would be forced to lock you away in the attic for the good of the village. I don't believe that such an existence would be a very pleasant one, but then it's not up to me to make your decisions for you." (p. 39) So...going into the story, we understand that Charlotte is practical and realistic in her views of life, even though her disturbing dreams plunge her into a night-time world of hallucinatory fantasy. The one element that is missing from Charlotte's personality is a sense of fear or awe; she seems emotionally unaffected by the strange and frightening aspects of the House of Darkling: the appearance of the dead wife, the evilness of Mr. Whatley, the horror of the tentacled monsters, and the realization of what her final choice must be. As each strange event occurs, Charlotte's only thought is of how it will affect the children. There is a jarring duality of Charlotte's character as she exhibits such dispassionate behavior when confronted with the alarming elements of the House of Darkling, but pines like a young girl for Henry Darrow's affections.
The plot—the "game" played by Mr. Whatley and Charlotte—didn't really grab me until the final scenes. In the early stages, the dialogue between the two was nebulous and unfathomable, and the rules of the game were hard to decipher. But by the last five chapters, the book had become a page-turner, with compelling action and escalating suspense driving the plot to the final climactic scene and the ambiguous ending.
The descriptive language is lush and beautifully contrived. Each oddity of the mansion is described at length, in great detail. If you enjoy atmospheric writing, you'll like that aspect of the book. Here's an example: "The elegant crystal chandeliers that hung in empty space above the room began to bloom with liquid flame, light erupting out of them like stars to illuminate the corners of the space where gilded curios and antique end tables held glittering, unknowable things: strange pools of water that rippled in place but did not drip or cascade unto the floor; an iridescent apple with skin so glossy and sleek that the light it invited made it appear translucent; a portrait of a crying old woman whose tears smeared the paint; a pair of shears so sharp they seemed to cut the very light that touched their edges. But these baubles were nothing compared to the transformation that occurred at the center of the room in the mosaic. The floor was blazing with a radiant fire, pulsing in time to the silent song of the universe, throbbing with life and energy, searing not the eyes but something secret in the soul." (p. 91)
Click HERE to read a free, on-line epilogue to Charlotte Markham and the House of Darkling. If you enjoy this book, I recommend that you try Ransom Riggs' "Miss Peregrine's Home for Peculiar Children." Click HERE to read my review of that book.
The plot—the "game" played by Mr. Whatley and Charlotte—didn't really grab me until the final scenes. In the early stages, the dialogue between the two was nebulous and unfathomable, and the rules of the game were hard to decipher. But by the last five chapters, the book had become a page-turner, with compelling action and escalating suspense driving the plot to the final climactic scene and the ambiguous ending.
The descriptive language is lush and beautifully contrived. Each oddity of the mansion is described at length, in great detail. If you enjoy atmospheric writing, you'll like that aspect of the book. Here's an example: "The elegant crystal chandeliers that hung in empty space above the room began to bloom with liquid flame, light erupting out of them like stars to illuminate the corners of the space where gilded curios and antique end tables held glittering, unknowable things: strange pools of water that rippled in place but did not drip or cascade unto the floor; an iridescent apple with skin so glossy and sleek that the light it invited made it appear translucent; a portrait of a crying old woman whose tears smeared the paint; a pair of shears so sharp they seemed to cut the very light that touched their edges. But these baubles were nothing compared to the transformation that occurred at the center of the room in the mosaic. The floor was blazing with a radiant fire, pulsing in time to the silent song of the universe, throbbing with life and energy, searing not the eyes but something secret in the soul." (p. 91)
Click HERE to read a free, on-line epilogue to Charlotte Markham and the House of Darkling. If you enjoy this book, I recommend that you try Ransom Riggs' "Miss Peregrine's Home for Peculiar Children." Click HERE to read my review of that book.
Saturday, March 23, 2013
UPDATE! Deborah Coates: HALLIE MICHAELS SERIES
I have just updated a previous post for Deborah Coates with a review of the second book in her HALLIE MICHAELS SERIES: Deep Down.
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Friday, March 22, 2013
UPDATE! Patricia Briggs: MERCY THOMPSON SERIES
I have just updated a previous post for Patricia Briggs with a review of the seventh book in her MERCY THOMPSON SERIES:
Frost Burned.
Frost Burned.
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Thursday, March 21, 2013
Liesel Schwarz: THE CHRONICLES OF LIGHT AND SHADOW
Author: Liesel Schwarz
Series: THE CHRONICLES OF LIGHT AND SHADOW Plot Type: Steampunk with elements of romance and horror
Ratings: Violence-4; Sensuality-2; Humor-3
Publisher and Titles: Del Rey
A Conspiracy of Alchemists (3/2013)
A Clockwork Heart (8/2013)
Sky Pirates (7/2014)
This ongoing post was revised and updated on 6/12/16 to include a review of Sky Pirates, the third novel in the series. That review appears first, followed by an overview of the world-building and a reviews of the first two novels.
FAIR
WARNING: My review of Sky Pirates
contains spoilers for the previous novels.
NOVEL 3: Sky Pirates
PUBLISHER'S BLURB:
As this novel opens, Elle is flying a female client from Khartoum to London with a shipment of antiquities from an ancient tomb. When the Water Lily is attacked by pirates—specifically by pirates under the command of Elle's former adversary Logan Dashwood—the passenger is killed and Elle is captured. Before the passenger dies, she tells Elle that she can find out how to save her lost husband, Hugh Marsh, by traveling to the temple at Angkor Wat (in Cambodia) and consulting a spirit woman bound into the temple's stone wall.
Meanwhile, Elle's bitter enemy, Patrice Chevalier, gathers his newly obtained dark powers and takes over the Order of Sacred Warlocks by killing the Council leader. He then summons a hellhound to track down Elle so that he can enslave her and use her Oracle powers as he wishes.
The storyline follows Elle and Dashwood as they fly first to San Francisco and then to Cambodia with the Hellhound close behind (although Elle keeps Dashwood in the dark about all of her dark magical troubles). Schwarz periodically inserts scenes in which Patrice displays his viscously evil nature and lets us in on his plans for the future: world domination, of course, because that's what every supernatural villain yearns for. We also get a few scenes with Hugh and his watcher, Jack, although they are few and far between until the very last part of the book.
Elle's journey is complicated by the fact that she finds herself physically attracted to Dashwood (and vice versa), but she tries to fight the attraction because she is still married to Marsh, even though he may never be more than a wraith in the Shadow World. By this point, Marsh is just a whispery, skeletal figure, wasting away more each time Elle catches a glimpse of him. All through the book, she beats herself up emotionally because she believes that she brings disaster and death to everyone she loves, or even befriends.
The early scenes in which Elle settles down to work as Dashwood's navigator and becomes friends with his crew members are relatively peaceful. But after the Hound catches up with Elle, and after Patrice puts a bounty on her head, there is no more peace—just deadly attacks, airship crashes, and a final reckoning with Patrice and the Hound.
As I said earlier, this book ends with a cliffhanger—a romantic cliffhanger—so we'll have to await a fourth novel to see who wins Elle's heart. According to information I found online, this is the final book in a three-book contract with Random House, so the fourth book—if it ever comes—might very well be either self-published or with another publisher.
In any case, this third novel is quite good—much better, in fact, than the second. Elle has learned a lot of life lessons during the past year of so, and she's not the naïve, girlish adventurer she was back in book one. The development of the relationship between Elle and Dashwood is well handled—not an instant-lust situation by any means. Dashwood offers a shoulder to lean on and he’s a brave man who always has her back. It’s no wonder that Elle is attracted to him. All through the story, Elle is depressed about the fate of her husband, unsure that she can ever find him much less rescue him from his wraith state, and she is still trying to figure out just how to use and control her ever-expanding Oracle powers. I really hope that Schwarz returns to this story and provides a resolution. Even a novella would be welcome. Click HERE to read or listen to an excerpt from Sky Pirates on the novel's Amazon.com page by clicking on either the cover art or the "Listen" icon.
For romance and urban fantasy fans and readers of Gail Carriger’s Changeless
and Cherie Priest’s Boneshaker, this thrilling historical fantasy
adventure features warlocks, fairies, and the unforgettable heroine—the daring
dirigible pilot Elle Chance—who navigates the realms between the Light and
Shadow.
With her husband,
Hugh Marsh, missing in the netherworld and presumed dead, Elle Chance loses
herself in the task at hand: piloting the airship Water Lily on
commissions across the globe. But as it turns out, her beloved is very much
alive—the once-powerful warlock reduced to a wraith. When Water Lily is
threatened by pirates, Elle will have to channel all her power as the
Oracle—the keeper of the barrier between the two Realms—to try to save what she
loves most. As the dark forces of Shadow converge around her, Elle must find a
way to breach the curse that binds Marsh. But once released, will Marsh return
to her—or is their love destined to die so that he can live?
MY REVIEW:
I somehow missed reading this third novel when it was published two years ago, so I'm adding it now to this ongoing review of the series. Unfortunately, Schwarz has not yet published a fourth book in this series, so we can only hope that she gives us a final novel that ties up all of the loose ends that are left hanging at the end of Sky Pirate.
MY REVIEW:
I somehow missed reading this third novel when it was published two years ago, so I'm adding it now to this ongoing review of the series. Unfortunately, Schwarz has not yet published a fourth book in this series, so we can only hope that she gives us a final novel that ties up all of the loose ends that are left hanging at the end of Sky Pirate.
As this novel opens, Elle is flying a female client from Khartoum to London with a shipment of antiquities from an ancient tomb. When the Water Lily is attacked by pirates—specifically by pirates under the command of Elle's former adversary Logan Dashwood—the passenger is killed and Elle is captured. Before the passenger dies, she tells Elle that she can find out how to save her lost husband, Hugh Marsh, by traveling to the temple at Angkor Wat (in Cambodia) and consulting a spirit woman bound into the temple's stone wall.
Meanwhile, Elle's bitter enemy, Patrice Chevalier, gathers his newly obtained dark powers and takes over the Order of Sacred Warlocks by killing the Council leader. He then summons a hellhound to track down Elle so that he can enslave her and use her Oracle powers as he wishes.
The storyline follows Elle and Dashwood as they fly first to San Francisco and then to Cambodia with the Hellhound close behind (although Elle keeps Dashwood in the dark about all of her dark magical troubles). Schwarz periodically inserts scenes in which Patrice displays his viscously evil nature and lets us in on his plans for the future: world domination, of course, because that's what every supernatural villain yearns for. We also get a few scenes with Hugh and his watcher, Jack, although they are few and far between until the very last part of the book.
Elle's journey is complicated by the fact that she finds herself physically attracted to Dashwood (and vice versa), but she tries to fight the attraction because she is still married to Marsh, even though he may never be more than a wraith in the Shadow World. By this point, Marsh is just a whispery, skeletal figure, wasting away more each time Elle catches a glimpse of him. All through the book, she beats herself up emotionally because she believes that she brings disaster and death to everyone she loves, or even befriends.
The early scenes in which Elle settles down to work as Dashwood's navigator and becomes friends with his crew members are relatively peaceful. But after the Hound catches up with Elle, and after Patrice puts a bounty on her head, there is no more peace—just deadly attacks, airship crashes, and a final reckoning with Patrice and the Hound.
As I said earlier, this book ends with a cliffhanger—a romantic cliffhanger—so we'll have to await a fourth novel to see who wins Elle's heart. According to information I found online, this is the final book in a three-book contract with Random House, so the fourth book—if it ever comes—might very well be either self-published or with another publisher.
In any case, this third novel is quite good—much better, in fact, than the second. Elle has learned a lot of life lessons during the past year of so, and she's not the naïve, girlish adventurer she was back in book one. The development of the relationship between Elle and Dashwood is well handled—not an instant-lust situation by any means. Dashwood offers a shoulder to lean on and he’s a brave man who always has her back. It’s no wonder that Elle is attracted to him. All through the story, Elle is depressed about the fate of her husband, unsure that she can ever find him much less rescue him from his wraith state, and she is still trying to figure out just how to use and control her ever-expanding Oracle powers. I really hope that Schwarz returns to this story and provides a resolution. Even a novella would be welcome. Click HERE to read or listen to an excerpt from Sky Pirates on the novel's Amazon.com page by clicking on either the cover art or the "Listen" icon.
WORLD-BUILDING
Steampunk is a popular genre right now, and its definition varies from one definer to the next. On her web site, the author says that her favorite definition is this simple one: "Steampunk is the science of what could have been." Schwarz goes on to say that "Steampunk for me is Jane Austen meets Jules Verne, Bram Stoker meets Elizabeth Gaskell and Wilkie Collins with a touch of H. Ryder Haggard thrown in for good measure...all chugging along with great big billows of steam. It's more a feeling and an atmosphere rather than genre-specific lines." In any case, the world of this series is filled with the usual gadgetry, goggles, and gears of traditional steampunk. One character's state-of-the-art car is "Fast as a bullet....With the dual reactor and new patented micro-condensers, we get about twenty miles to a gallon of water," which is pumped through portable hoses from the canals that border most roadways. The only steampunk element that is somewhat nontraditional is the slightly later time period: 1903, placing it on the cusp between the Victorian and Edwardian periods in merry old England. Click HERE to go to a page on the author's website where she discusses steampunk and provides a list of links to her favorite steampunk web sites.
In this mythology, the Shadow is the supernatural world (including Warlocks, Alchemists, Nightwalkers [vampires], and various types of Fae), and the Light is the non-magical world—the regular mortal world. "The balance between Light and Shadow is like a set of scales. If one side grows heavier than the other, the balance is upset and the world is thrown into chaos." (from A Conspiracy of Alchemists, p. 160)
Each side is aware of the other, and, in fact, they interact. For example, here is an evening scene in Paris in which "two electromancers...strolled down the Boulevard Saint-Michel. Behind them, the streetlights blinked on one by one as the little hermits ignited the glass-covered spark cores on top of the lampposts." (from A Conspiracy of Alchemists, p. 27) These electromancers light the streetlights for the Light world each evening using their Shadow talents. Most Light-side households employ brownies or house goblins from the Shadow side for cleaning and other types of housework. Steam-driven automatons do the heavy work, "made from shiny steel painted in...ice cream shades of light blue, yellow, or even red. Little puffs of steam escaped from their polished articulated legs as they ambled along." (from A Conspiracy of Alchemists, p. 134).
The most powerful creatures on the Shadow side are the Warlocks, who are governed by the Brotherhood, the Order of Sacred Warlocks. The Council is generally opposed to scientific advances. As one character explains, "The Council does not care about science and progress. It is [that] very work...that causes the Shadow to shrink and diminish. For each new miraculous modern invention that sees the light of day, a creature of magic in the Shadow loses its place in this world and disappears." (from A Conspiracy of Alchemists, p. 151)
The Alchemists, who would like to have the power of the Warlocks, are bound to serve the Nightwalkers for all eternity and are, in fact, the daylight keepers of the Nightwalker sects.
NOVEL 1: A Conspiracy of Alchemists
Elle soon learns that Marsh has an intimate knowledge of her family background as well as having his own nefarious reasons for staying by her side. Elle lost her mother when she was just a child and has always been told that her mother ran off with a cult and died as a result of her misadventures. Marsh tells her that that story is untrue and that her mother was actually an Oracle descended from the original Oracle of Delphi and that Elle is her successor. The oracle issue is the primary glitch in the romance that rapidly develops between Elle and Marsh, who turns out to be both a powerful Warlock and a member of English nobility: Viscount Greychester. Their relationship soon disintegrates into a tug of war as Marsh tries to convince Elle that she has a duty to both the Shadow and the Light worlds to take up her Oracle duties—a celibate life of virtual enslavement to the Warlocks—while she vehemently insists that she has no such powers and wants only to find her father and head back home to her happy life in Oxford.
The external complication in the plot comes in the form of a sociopathic Alchemist named Sir Eustace Abercrombie, a powerful industrialist who is determined to capture Elle and enslave her in order to drain her considerable powers for his own ends. Abercrombie is a by-the-numbers villain who overflows with melodramatic evil in every scene. In an innovative twist, his chocolate factory makes products for the Shadow side (like blood-filled chocolates for Nightwalkers), which reminds me of Kerrelyn Sparks' character, Roman Draganesti (in her STAKED SERIES), whose company manufactures blood-fortified liquors like Blisskey.
Elle is definitely a spunky and independent character, but she is so achingly immature and mindlessly stubborn that she soon becomes quite annoying to the reader. Marsh, on the other hand, is so jaded and paternalistic, that it's hard to understand how he would ever fall so hard for this naive, contrary girl. In one on-the-mark comment, Marsh bluntly queries Elle, "Don't you sometimes get a little tired of being so constantly outraged?" (p. 183) Several of the supporting characters are straight-out stereotypes: the nutty professor, the cacklingly evil villain, the corrupt council member.
In another innovative touch, many chapters are preceded by a narration by an absinthe Fairy named Adele who absorbs herself into Elle's diamond bracelet in an early scene. She is obviously on Elle's side but plays mostly a passive-observer role until almost the end of the book.
The strongest element in this series is the world-building, which is accomplished with grace and complexity without any awkward info dumping. The weakness is in the characters, who come off as relatively one-dimensional and predictable. Still, I will read the next book, which is kicked off on the very last page of this book with a mild cliffhanger. Click HERE to read or listen to an excerpt from A Conspiracy of Alchemists on the novel's Amazon.com page by clicking on either the cover art or the "Listen" icon.
NOVEL 2: A Clockwork Heart
Essentially, the plot follows Elle as she and the Baroness Loisa Belododia (a vampire friend of Hugh's) team up with some unlikely acquaintances to rescue Hugh, figure out exactly what happened to him, and try to fix him. The story's villain is Clothilde, an elemental witch with power over water and weather, including lightning. She has been hired by the nefarious Consortium to manufacture an army of unstoppable soldiers, each with a clockwork heart. The Consortium is a powerful and greedy group of international financiers who control the financial markets of the world. Clothilde is also known as La Dame Blanche—a lady in white: "As white as sea-bleached bone, [her hair] reached down to her knees. Her skin was pale and fine; her features perfectly molded as if from the finest porcelain. Her lips were bloodless and sculpted, the face of a marble statue." (p. 16) Clothilde is a creature of the Shadow, forbidden to do harm in the Light, but she arrogantly believes that she is so powerful that she can do whatever she wishes. She plans to double cross the Consortium and keep the army—and Hugh Marsh—for herself. Clothilde's plan requires the power produced by electromancers "who harvested lightning and other forms of static electricity that they combined with their Shadow magic to turn into spark, which is the blue liquid that powered the steam engines, which in turn ran the world." (p. 61)
In addition to her frantic search for Hugh, Elle is also trying to settle in with her Oracle powers, which she has been using for just six months. One of the downsides is that she must constantly contend with the irritating mental voices of the previous Oracles, who either criticize her or give her cryptic advice. As the Oracle, Elle is responsible for keeping the Shadow and the Light in balance. "The realms of Light and Shadow lay like mirror images on one another....On the Light side lay the world of man. It was a place of progress, enlightenment, and science: the modern world. On the Shadow side was the ancient magical side where creatures spoken of in myth and folklore dwelled forevermore. Like the spine that holds the many pages of a book together,...[Elle] was the spine, the binding force that held everything together." (p. 53)
Although Schwarz is a good story teller, she stretches the limits here when she stuffs Christabel Pankhurst and her suffragettes into the story line. Also, the opening scene in which Elle wins an airship in a poker game goes on far too long for its eventual weak pay-off. In the most awkward scene—the requisite showdown that climaxes the novel—the author gathers together several unlikely and disparate groups, turning them into a deus ex machina that leaps out of nowhere into the heart of the action. The story ends on a sad note, with several loose plot threads that will no doubt form the plot for the third novel.
The strongest element in this book is the development of Elle's character. By the end, Elle has been beaten down into submission by her terrible losses, and she is no longer the naive and immature girl that she was in the beginning. Although Hugh's final fate is not clear, we do get evidence that he will continue to be part of the action.
All in all, I'd have to give this book a grade of C+. The story line moves along nicely, with compelling action, and angst-filled emotion, but it suffers from for the awkward inclusion of outsiders. The pervasive, sometimes suffocating, darkness of the story could have been relieved by a bit more comic relief—a role I assume was supposed to have been played by Jasper and his supernatural groupies. I do admit, though, that I am planning to read the next book just to see what happens to Hugh. Click HERE to read or listen to an excerpt from A Clockwork Heart on the novel's Amazon.com page by clicking on either the cover art or the "Listen" icon.
In addition to her frantic search for Hugh, Elle is also trying to settle in with her Oracle powers, which she has been using for just six months. One of the downsides is that she must constantly contend with the irritating mental voices of the previous Oracles, who either criticize her or give her cryptic advice. As the Oracle, Elle is responsible for keeping the Shadow and the Light in balance. "The realms of Light and Shadow lay like mirror images on one another....On the Light side lay the world of man. It was a place of progress, enlightenment, and science: the modern world. On the Shadow side was the ancient magical side where creatures spoken of in myth and folklore dwelled forevermore. Like the spine that holds the many pages of a book together,...[Elle] was the spine, the binding force that held everything together." (p. 53)
Although Schwarz is a good story teller, she stretches the limits here when she stuffs Christabel Pankhurst and her suffragettes into the story line. Also, the opening scene in which Elle wins an airship in a poker game goes on far too long for its eventual weak pay-off. In the most awkward scene—the requisite showdown that climaxes the novel—the author gathers together several unlikely and disparate groups, turning them into a deus ex machina that leaps out of nowhere into the heart of the action. The story ends on a sad note, with several loose plot threads that will no doubt form the plot for the third novel.
The strongest element in this book is the development of Elle's character. By the end, Elle has been beaten down into submission by her terrible losses, and she is no longer the naive and immature girl that she was in the beginning. Although Hugh's final fate is not clear, we do get evidence that he will continue to be part of the action.
All in all, I'd have to give this book a grade of C+. The story line moves along nicely, with compelling action, and angst-filled emotion, but it suffers from for the awkward inclusion of outsiders. The pervasive, sometimes suffocating, darkness of the story could have been relieved by a bit more comic relief—a role I assume was supposed to have been played by Jasper and his supernatural groupies. I do admit, though, that I am planning to read the next book just to see what happens to Hugh. Click HERE to read or listen to an excerpt from A Clockwork Heart on the novel's Amazon.com page by clicking on either the cover art or the "Listen" icon.