A. C. Arthur: SHADOW SHIFTERS SERIES

Author:  A. C. Arthur
Series:  SHADOW SHIFTERS
Plot Type:  Soul Mate Romance (SMR)
Ratings:  Violence—4; Sensuality—5; Humor—1
Publisher and Titles:  St. Martin's
        Temptation Rising (4/2012)
        Seduction's Shift (9/2012)
        Passion's Prey (3/2013)
        Shifter's Claim (8/2014)(also published in four e-novella "episodes" )
        Hunger's Mate (2/2015)

        Primal Heat (8/2015)  

     This post was revised and updated on 3/19/15 to include the publishers' blurb for Hunger's Mate, and Primal Heat, the fifth and sixth novels in the series. This post begins with an overview of the world-building followed by my reviews of novels 1 through 4, and ending with the back-cover blurbs for Hunger's Mate and Primal Heat. After the fourth novel, I stopped reviewing the series for reasons discussed at length in my reviews. I will continue to add new titles and blurbs to this on-going post as they become available.

               WORLD-BUILDING               

     In this world, feline shape shifters live in the mortal world, but so far, they have passed as humans, keeping their true identities a secret. Here's a paragraph from the author's web site explaining her mythology: "The Amazon is known for its rain forests, as well as the often reported sightings of strange animals, or new species. The Shadow Shifters are just that—a new species of part man, part cat shape shifter. There are currently five known species of shifters originated from the Gungi rainforest and now spread out across the world, namely: the Topètinia (jaguars); The Croesteriia (cheetahs); The Lormenia (tigers); The Bosinia (cougars); and The Serfins (white lions). Years ago, Shadow Shifters migrated to the United States, opting to live amongst their human counterparts in harmony. This harmony only exists because of their silence, once the humans find out about their distinctly different DNA the Shadows are sure to face a problematic future." Note of clarification: In this quotation, the author spells the name of the jaguar group "Topètinia" but in the books, the spelling is "Topètenia."

     The good guys are the Shadow Shifters, all of whom trace their ancestry back to the Brazilian rain forest. They live by a code of ethics called the Ètica and are ruled by the Assembly, a council of elders based back in the rain forest. Many of these shifters have migrated to the U.S., where they have formed an organization called the Stateside Shadow Shifters and divided themselves into tribes called factions, each led by a Faction Leader. As the series opens, the East Coast Faction Leader is Rome Reynolds, the Topètenia hero of book 1. The author provides a short glossary of terms at the beginning of each book.  

     The bad guys, who refuse to follow the Ètica and live only to sate their hungers for sex and death, are the rogues. They also migrated from the rain forest, but they do not belong to any of the Shadow Shifter factions. As the series begins, the rogues are led by Sabar Tabares, a power-mad, drug-dealing killer whose goal is to be the most powerful being in the U.S. First, though, he must insinuate his way into behind-the-scenes power roles by manipulating weak and greedy human government officials, and—more importantly—he must get rid of the Shadow Shifters.

     The soul mate experience—called the joining—is at the heart of each book. The word for mate in this series is companheiro, and when a couple joins, their scent changes to something called the companheiro cal or—the shared scent between mates. 

     This is a run-of-the-mill paranormal romance series with stereotypical, cardboard characters and a series plot arc that we've seen many times before. If you want to read a solid, well-written feline shifter series, you can't go wrong with one of these: Lora Leigh's terrific FELINE BREEDS, Christine Feehan's LEOPARD SERIES, or Juliana Stone's JAGUAR WARRIORS. Also, Nalini Singh includes a number of feline shifter love stories in her PSY-CHANGELING series. If you like your cat shifters a bit smaller, try Rachel Vincent's WERECATS/SHIFTERS series. You can click on any of the series titles above to go to my reviews.

            NOVEL 1: Temptation Rising            

     The heroine of the first book is Washington, D.C., police officer Kalina Harper, who is currently working undercover at Rome's law practice trying to get evidence that he is involved with South American drug cartels. As soon as Kalina and Rome meet, the sexual firestorm begins, and it burns hotter and more fiery as the story moves along. Both Kalina and Rome are orphans. Kalina never knew her parents and was raised in loveless foster homes. Rome was ten years old when his parents were murdered by rogues while he was hidden away in an adjoining closet. Rome has been trying to track down his parents' killers ever since.

     The story follows Kalina as she investigates Rome while she tries unsuccessfully to keep her lust for him under control. In the meantime, Rome is dealing with an outbreak of mutilation murders that have obviously been committed by the rogues. When the rogues begin to stalk Kalina, Rome and his friends must figure out what Sabar is planning so that they can stop him. 

     This is a typical SMR story, with the stubborn heroine—unaware of the deceitfulness within her police department and ignorant of her hero's true nature—making one dumb decision after another in true TSTL form. Her hero is also stereotypical: a dominant, demanding alpha who insists on making all the decisions in their relationship. Their love scenes are extremely graphic and, from the beginning, they engage in unprotected sex, which is generally a no-no in paranormal fiction these days. Those scenes begin to get a bit repetitive by the end of the book, especially with the extreme overuse of the word "turgid." (Let's hope the author uses a thesaurus when she writes her next book.)

     Unfortunately, the series has many, many problems, not the least of which is the plethora of grammar and usage errors and the awkward sentence structure within the narrative. I give the St. Martin's editor and copy-proofer a D- for letting these errors through. The story is told in a melodramatic, breathless manner with lots of repetitive, angst-filled interior monologues. Here's one example (just one of hundreds) in which Rome ponders his future. In this scene, he is standing at he parents' grave: "The air was ripe with pollution, thick with the stench of death. It was all around him, coming on the stifling hot breeze, and soon it would knock on his door again....but this time, he vowed to be ready." (p. 244)

     The plot has a few illogical moments. For example, early on in the story a mysterious man unexpectedly delivers an envelope to Kalina at her apartment, but she doesn't open it until after she gets to work to find only a photograph of herself taken two years ago while she was undercover. Why would she wait so long to open that envelope? Why doesn't she give the photograph and envelope to her superiors? Later, she finds another envelope stuck under her apartment door—more photographs, this time, shots of her in various stages of undress inside her apartment. Does she search her apartment for hidden cameras? No, she doesn't. Does she report this to her superiors? No, again. Does she tell her (by now) lover, Rome? No, once more. See what I mean about her TSTL moments? Click HERE to read an excerpt from Temptation Rising.

            NOVEL 2:  Seduction's Shift            

     The lovers in the second book are Dominick (Nick) Delgado and Aryiola (Ary) Serino. Nick is a lawyer for Rome's firm in his human life, and a stone cold warrior/killer in his secret Shadow life. Ary is a curandero (a healer) who grew up in the Gungi rain forest. Nick and Ary met sixteen years ago when his family spent some time in the Gungi, He was nineteen, and she was sixteen. They had just one night of passion, and then he left and went back to the U.S. without any explanation to her. When Ary is kidnapped by Sabar Tabares, the series villain, Nick and his fellow Shadow team members rescue her and bring her back to their home in Washington, D.C., where Nick tries to run her life and Ary gets rebellious (giving the reader a big hint that she's going to have a TSTL moment or two). 

     In this book, Sabar is still building his empire, this time by creating a new drug to sell on the streets of the U.S. That's why he needs Ary—at least that's what he says in the opening scenes when he has her in custody. As soon as Ary is rescued, however, Sabar decides he doesn't need her after all. Just as in book 1, this plot is full of truck-size holes. When Sabar's part of the story finally plays out in a series of twists and turns, we learn that Sabar never really needed Ary in the first place because he had someone even more valuable. So, why did he kidnap her? Apparently, that was just a plot manipulation by the author, who needed a gimmick to get Nick to the rain forest to rescue Ary and kick-start the romance.

     The convoluted story line follows Sabar as he dabbles in everything from kidnapping to drugs to bank robbing and then creates his own drugged-up army to attack the Shadows time and time again. Although Sabar seems to spend most of his time sneering at his underlings and lusting after human prostitutes and Shadow females, he somehow manages to stay one step ahead of the Shadows all the way through the book. Rome and his people have access to state-of-the-art technology, a skilled and loyal army of warriors, and connections with shifters across the country, so how can a small-time crime lord like Sabar infiltrate them so easily and be so knowledgeable about their innermost secrets? Nothing in the story even comes close to answering that question because Sabar is always portrayed as a not-too-smart, over-confident loser.

     The romance plot is completely stereotypical, with its saucy but submissive heroine and its über-alpha, emotion-choked hero who is completely unable to verbalize even the most general romantic thoughts. The two don't really have many conversations, other than the ones in which he is ordering her around and she is screaming that he can't treat her that way because he's not the boss of her. Actually, the couple is so overcome by lust most of the time that they don't spend much time talking about anything. 

     There is a sub-plot involving Ary's sad-sack father and her mentor, Yuri, but that story thread meanders around so much that it completely loses any sense of clarity or believability. An on-going, but unresolved, story line involves Rome's late father and Nick's late father, who were apparently involved in some sort of secretive activities that may or may not have been illegal.

     Unfortunately, this series is not getting any better. Once again, the plot is filled with improbable events. For example, when Nick and his crew burst in to rescue Ary in an early scene, they outnumber Sabar's villains four to two, but they just grab up Ary and run off. They don't even try to catch Sabar, even though taking down Sabar is the top item on the Shadow Shifters' agenda.

     The third book will tell the love story of FBI Agent/Shadow Shifter Xavier ("X") Santos-Markland and Caprise Delgado, Nick's stripper sister, who hates her shape-shifting heritage. Click HERE to read an excerpt from Seduction's Shift.    

            NOVEL 3:  Passion's Prey           

     The third book tells the love story of FBI Agent/Shadow Shifter Xavier ("X") Santos-Markland and Caprise Delgado, Nick's stripper sister, who has always hidden her despised shape-shifting heritage. The primary story line follows the development of the romance between X and Caprise while the action part of the plot has two parts: First, a mysterious man who appears to be working for the villainous Sabar is stalking and threatening Caprise, claiming that she is his true mate. Second, Sabar is attempting to purchase some high-tech automatic weapons to use against the Shadow Shifters (and anyone else who gets in his way). 

     Caprise has always denied her Topètenia heritage, opting instead to pass as human. She has always dreamed of being a dancer, but when that doesn't work out the way she wants, she gets a job as a stripper at Athena's, the low-class club that is at the center of Sabar's drug empire. Keep in mind that Caprise has a ten-million dollar trust fund and could go to any dancing school in the country (or, for that matter, do anything else she wanted to do), but she decides to strip (or be an exotic dancer, as she calls it) in a raunchy club frequented by drugged-out patrons. Already, her story is unrealistic and unbelievable. In addition to her dancing and stripping skills, Caprise is one tough cookie. She has "an eighth dan black belt in tae kwon do, had mastered shooting on an open and enclosed range..., and had taken boxing classes for almost a year", which makes her "agile and deadly in the fighting ring." (p. 138) Unfortunately, we don't get to witness any of Caprise's extraordinary fighting skills. Instead, we are treated to her perpetually sullen and acidic disposition as she strikes out verbally against almost everyone with whom she comes in contact. You see, Caprise has a deep, dark secret that is the reason she has turned into this unhappy, dissatisfied woman. X is also keeping a horrible secret about his past, and that has caused him to avoid any long-term romantic relationships. Even with all of the ongoing hostility between Caprise and X, though, they still manage to have plenty of sex. In fact, they spend many hours enjoying X-rated, graphically described bedroom acrobatics that include D/s situations. Even as they constantly bicker and sneer at each other, the two soon begin falling into true love, fighting their feelings every step of the way.

     The story is told in the third person with the point of view mostly switching back and forth between Caprise and X. Three other characters also get some POV opportunities: Sabar, who is on the downswing in this book; Darel, who runs Athena's and is Sabar's right-hand man; and Rolando, the man who is stalking Caprise.

     The melodramatic narrative dominates the story, just as it does in the previous books, and the characters are mostly one-dimensional and stereotypical: the multi-gifted, sarcastic heroine with a dark secret and the emotionally stunted, muscle-bound hero with a tragic childhood. We've seen these characters too many times to count. The author provides a plethora of name-brand dropping (e.g., Armani suits, Tag Heuer watches, Vera Wang gowns), but not nearly enough character development. When Caprise suddenly and inexplicably stops running away from her blossoming emotional involvement with X and begins trying to set a romantic trap for him, this reader was taken by surprise because Caprise's abrupt turn-around is nearly instantaneous, and she never indicates that she would consider embracing the mating urge so completely or so quickly—quite the opposite, really.  

   

     In the final chapters, the author telegraphs some clues about the further adventures of the Shadow Shifters: Near the end, we get hints that two new romances are in the offing, each involving one of the twin Shadow Shifter guards, Eli and Ezra. In the fifth novel, Ezra will be hooking up with Jewel, assistant to Sebastian's second-in-command at the Sedona, Arizona, compound. Also, just before the book's requisite climactic scene, Rome and his top staff members learn some shocking facts about Baxter (Rome's mysterious "butler") and the history of the Shadow Shifters—information about the long-ago times when they were all still confined to the Gungi rainforest.

     All in all, this book isn't any better or any worse than the previous two. If you liked books 1 and 2, you'll probably enjoy this one. I just wish that the author would spend more time on character development and plot transitions and less time on melodramatic, emotional anguish and unnecessary clothing descriptions. Click HERE to read an excerpt from Seduction's Shift.

            NOVEL 4:  Shifter's Claim           

     As the previous book ended, Priya Drake, a newspaper reporter, witnessed a fight in a Washington, D.C. alley that convinced her that cat people truly exist. Although no one appears to believe her, she soon gets a mysterious e-mail from someone who has kidnapped her brother and threatens to kill him if Priya doesn't investigate Roman (Rome) Reynolds (the Shadow Shifters Assembly Leader) and his men and reveal them to the public as cat shifters. Right from the beginning, this novel is on shaky grounds. Why would the villain select Priya as the one to investigate this case. She is, at best, a second-tier (or less) reporter who has never done any major investigative work, and she obviously has no investigative journalism skills. Her method is to try to break into Rome's hotel room and confront him with personal questions. Why would any intelligent journalist believe that a powerful man like Rome would allow a reporter to get past his high-level security. He doesn't know her; he doesn't trust her; and she is threatening to go public with the biggest secret in his people's lives, so how could she possibly believe that Rome would answer any questions from her at all? 

     When Priya does try to get into Rome's hotel room, she is stopped by Sebastian (Bas) Perry, Faction Leader (FL) for the Southwest, whose headquarters is in his Perryville Resort in Sedona. Bas runs a number of resorts worldwide, but his main duties are to maintain a Shadow army and keep the rogues in his territory under control.

     The plot centers on Priya's continuing search for information and on attempts by a mysterious group of humans and rogues to smuggle high-tech weapons, drugs, and—oddly—bags of blood across the border from Mexico. The blood bags have been shipped from a U.S. government laboratory in Sedona—Comastaz Laboratories, a facility run by Dr. Mario DiLaurent and Captain Lawrence Crowe with the stated purpose of developing new and improved defensive weapons. If you can't figure out where the blood came from and why the lab wants it, you haven't read very much paranormal fiction because this is a very familiar trope. The action includes several minor showdowns between Bas's warriors and various groups of rogues. Ultimately, it is obvious that there are two sets of related bad guys—the government "scientists" and the drug-dealing rogues, now led by Darel Charles since the death of Sabar in the previous book. Another possible villain is the sociopath Boden Estevez, the first rogue, who is allegedly dead, but may still be alive.

     The romance story line follows Priya and Bas on the bumpy road to their companheiro—their mating. Bas had a tragic experience with a human lover fourteen years ago that ended with her death at the hands of a group of rogues, and since then he has sworn off all emotional and sexual entanglements with humans. Priya has been unlucky in her previous romantic relationships and views Bas as a spoiled, arrogant rich guy who needs to be taken down a peg or two. In a stereotypical tragic-family portrayal, Priya has grown up poor, with an abusive father, a drug-addicted brother, a sister on welfare, and a mother who is always on the verge of a nervous breakdown. I love the fact that Arthur places African Americans into prominent roles in her series, but couldn't Priya have come from a middle-class or blue-collar family instead of being a clichéd poster child for urban poverty?   

     The frequent sex scenes between Bas and Priya are graphically portrayed, so if you're looking for erotica, this book is for you. The downer for me was Priya's grossly detailed two-page scene early in the story (Chapter 3) that could have come from a book entitled Vibrators for Dummies (if there is such a book)—much more than I really wanted to know about Priya's self-pleasuring techniques.

     Just as in the previous novels, this one of full of plot holes, illogical behavior, errors in continuity, and strange word choices. I was mystified in one scene in which Priya is attacked by a rogue shifter on the grounds of the Perryville Resort. In this scene, Priya is basically surrounded by Shadow Shifter guards who are dispersed all around the area—shifters who supposedly have an excellent sense of smell. Yet not a single guard detects the scent of the rogue shifter as he enters the scene and mingles with the crowd. Note to the author: Either these shifters have a super sense of smell or they don't. You can't have it both ways just so that you can (awkwardly) manipulate the action to suit your purposes.

     Arthur describes the air in Sedona as "sultry" and "thick," both of which connote extreme heat plus extreme humidity. The air on a summer day in below-sea-level, humid New Orleans would be sultry and thick, but not the dry, thin air in high-elevation (4,500 feet), low-humidity Sedona. In another example that jumped off the page for me, Priya looks at a guard who is taking her to Bas's apartment: "He wasn't her enemy, she thought drably…He was just doing his job and she was taking her sexual frustrations out on him." (p. 147) "Drably" isn't the right word here. That word means dull or lacking in spirit, and Priya is anything but spiritless. In this scene, Priya is upset with Bas and is feeling peevish, perverse, irritated, and sullen—but definitely not drab.   

     Brand-name dropping continues to intrude into the story line. Arthur never misses a chance to insert a specific, unnecessary reference to Bas's clothing and accessories: his TAG Heuer Monaco watch, True Religion jeans, Under Armour shirt, Ermenegildo Zegna tie, etc.  

     This series has not improved in quality since the first book, so I will not be reviewing any more of these novels, mostly because the characters are flat and stereotypical and the plots are stale and full of holes, If, unlike me, you enjoyed the first three books, you can look forward to more of the same. Click HERE to read an excerpt—you'll have to scroll down the page below the strip of cover images to find it.

            NOVEL 5:  Hunger's Mate           

PUBLISHER'S BACK-COVER BLURB: Half-man, half-animal, a Shadow Shifter must walk the line between predator and prey, hunger and obsession—to capture the woman he loves.

     A natural born hunter proud of his birthright, Ezra Preston agrees to hide his identity and pretend to be human—to learn what his enemies know of his kind. But even undercover, it's not in his nature to play games with a woman. Especially when he discovers the beautiful creature has been keeping secrets of her own. 

     This is no ordinary woman he's stalking but an alluring and mysterious cat thief—with dangerous secrets of her own. Jewel Jenner has plotted and schemed for months, hiding her knowledge of a top-secret operation to save her ailing father. Captivated by her passion, skill, and courage, Ezra wants to help Jewel on her mission. But when he discovers how far she's gone—sleeping with the enemy to steal a fortune in diamonds--he must decide if he can trust this enthralling woman with his secret…or trust his fiercest instincts when he's near her.

            NOVEL 6:  Primal Heat           

PUBLISHER'S BACK-COVER BLURB: In the savage world of the Shadow Shifters, desire can be as dangerous as nature itself….



As guard to the most powerful shifter in the human world, Eli Preston is sworn to protect his leader, defend their alliance, and keep his darker instincts in check. But when a beautiful female trainee arouses his jaguar senses, there is no stopping the beast within. He must have her. Even if it jeopardizes the deadliest mission of his life…


When the heat is on--and the claws come out--the heart is the fiercest hunter…



For six years, Nivea has been waiting for Eli to take her in his arms, unleash his animal urges, and claim her as his mate. But once their passion is unleashed--in a reckless moment of pure unbridled lust--nothing can ever be the same. The battlelines are drawn: man versus animal, shifter versus shifter. And Eli must be prepared to fight for his life--and his love--or he will lose Nivea forever...